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21 05 2009

We have selected some students to share some work they are happy with.

Here are some recent work from our recents.

 

sunburn

SUNSHINE

Today is a beautiful,  hot  sunny day. You can get sunburnt.

Look outside you can see a yellow, hot, boiling sun.

I am on fire. What are you going to do? Are you going to help me?

No! That’s ok. the rain came to help me. the cool rain that I felt on my

hot, beautiful body.

                                                        by Jaden

Dylan the Drummer.

Dylan Elise, was invited to our school, on Tuesday afternoon, the 19th of May to perform for us.

Heaps of people and visitors congregated and watched the amazing drumming set. Dylan performed different drum beats like latin ,jazz, rock and funky beats and Dylan even performed a song that had only one drum piece in it .Guess what it was . A Hi- Hat. The Hi-Hat was only one of the pieces from his drum set that he introduced to us. Like ,he pointed out a snare drum, a cow -bell (which isn’t usually in a drum -set )and my favourite, the bass drum.

I enjoyed having Dylan, come to our school and show us his talent. I hope he can visit our school again!


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10 responses

21 05 2009
Mrs Karaka

What a great story Jaden. You worked really hard on this today.

See, you can do it.

21 05 2009
jacky

I agree, i like your story you worked really hard yesterday.Jacky

21 05 2009
jax

Nice work JADEN you really worked hard on your Cinquain poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!

21 05 2009
ANIALLA

hi Jaden I like your story

21 05 2009
david

Hi Jaden its me just want 2 pop by 2 say that you rock

21 05 2009
aliff

hi, i just want 2 say hello and 4 the poem is good.

21 05 2009
Wendy

jaden i liked your story you did yesterday,well done.

21 05 2009
aliff

hi, i just want 2 say hello and 4 the poem is the besttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!

21 05 2009
jax

hello JADEN i will c u 2morow at school and fantastic poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

27 05 2009
ckaraka

Thank you Maria for your great recount about our visiting drummer, Dylan.

Keep up the great writing.

Mrs Karaka

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